Creative Piece Of Writing

Two  weeks  ago in  Te Ngahere we were  learning  to use the correct structure for a creative piece of writing. The language features I was using were alliteration, metaphors and onomatopoeia. The theme of the writing was about reducing, reusing and recycling.  I think I did well on using my metaphors and I think I need to work on my alliteration.   

Language features: Alliteration, Metaphors and onomatopoeia  

HAIKU

Let’s stop littering

Our sea creatures will soon die

It is polluting     

Acrostic poem  

Pollution

Polluting is bad

Our sea creatures could  die

Let's stop littering

Lets stop now  

Unless you want to make our country look ugly

This can cause diseases

It can cause tourist to stop coming to our country  

Our environment will look ugly

Now is your chance to stop….

Limerick  

There's rubbish on our land fill  

The rubbish will literally kill  

Our sea creatures will soon die

The rubbish on the beach will fly

Onomatopoeia poetry

Swoosh, Swoosh, Swoosh

The sound of plastic wrap flying

Woosh, Woosh

Poems with a twist  

People picking up rubbish

sea animals saved  

People using heaps of energy  

Sea animals die

Cinquain

Pollution

Dying animals

Lots of rubbish  

People caring for animals

People caring for our country

Metaphoric poetry

It is sad

It is a polluter

It is a killer of sea life  

It is ongoing

It is  invincible

Persuasive writing

A couple of weeks ago in Te Ngahere we were learning to

use a persuasive structure correctly. I think that I needed to work on my punctuation. Also I think I did well on my question marks. The writing piece that we wrote about are  either ’Should plastic bags  be allowed in supermarkets?’ or ‘Should we start Reducing, Reusing and Recycling?’

What do you think? Should we reduce, reuse and recycle or should we pollute the earth? Your choice. . . I think we should start recycling because if we don't

it can cause less natural resources, pollution and many more. But if we do start reducing, reusing and recycling we  will be a happier and cleaner country than we already are.  

If we start reduce, reusing and recycling then our sea creatures won't die from plastic bags, aluminum cans etc. There  are  nearly of 300 albatrosses that die every year from the pollution. There are  also over 1,000,000 turtles that die due to plastic. When people start polluting, the fish eat the rubbish, then when you go fishing you catch the fish, then you eat the fish then you could get really sick. Around the world all 1,000,000 birds that are on the beach die from plastic.

Did you know that when you pollute, tourist’s won't come to the country?  

Then that means we will lose money for our economy. When tourists come to

our country we get a lot of money. We got approximately 745 thousand dollars for  tourists. Would you really want to lose that money???

Think about it, would you like to start reduce, reusing and recycling??

Or would you like to just let the sea creatures die, tourists not coming to our country. I know for sure I would go for the first option.